Remember – the scene where he learns he has cancer – not when he feels sick, not when he finds the lump, but when the doctor tells him the news.  It’s an important scene – write it dramatic, write it long, use your dialog skills.

yell3 “What”

“I’m sorry, it’s monophilosystemicblastomainuteri”

“I don’t have a uteri, you fuckwit.”